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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. 91Ex
The two pie charts illustrate aspects of Bowen Island that tourists enjoy the most and the least. It is clear that both pie charts are divided into four different categories. Overall, it seems that the biggest disadvantage is high cost of living there, which choose half of respondents. In second pie chart with advantages almost half visitors vote for a nice behaviour of the local people at 42%. Slightly more than a third of respondents enjoy the beautiful scenery of Bowen Island. In the terms of advantages, the third-place takes entertainment like culture and the smallest proportion has good accommodation at 11%. The most of tourists complain on too much expensive living and 25% of them lack enough of entertainment. Furthermore, 15% of the people also dislike probably bad weather on the island. The minority of respondents dislike poor food quality.
The two pie charts illustrate aspects of Bowen Island that tourists enjoy the most and the least.

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, it seems that the biggest disadvantage is high cost of living there, which choose half of respondents. In second pie chart with advantages almost half visitors vote for a nice
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behaviour
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beautiful
scenery of Bowen Island. In the terms of advantages, the third-place takes entertainment like culture and the smallest proportion has
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good
accommodation at 11%.

The
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most of tourists
complain on too much expensive living and 25% of them lack
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enough
of entertainment.
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, 15% of the
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people
also
dislike
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weather on the island. The minority of respondents
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dislike
poor food quality.

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

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