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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. 91Ex

The two pie charts illustrate aspects of Bowen Island that tourists enjoy the most and the least. It is clear that both pie charts are divided into four different categories. Overall, it seems that the biggest disadvantage is high cost of living there, which choose half of respondents. In second pie chart with advantages almost half visitors vote for a nice behaviour of the local people at 42%. Slightly more than a third of respondents enjoy the beautiful scenery of Bowen Island. In the terms of advantages, the third-place takes entertainment like culture and the smallest proportion has good accommodation at 11%. The most of tourists complain on too much expensive living and 25% of them lack enough of entertainment. Furthermore, 15% of the people also dislike probably bad weather on the island. The minority of respondents dislike poor food quality.

The two pie charts illustrate aspects of Bowen Island that tourists enjoy the most and the least.

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 categories. Overall
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 at 42%.

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beautiful
 scenery of Bowen Island. In the terms of advantages, the third-place takes entertainment like culture and the smallest proportion has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 accommodation at 11%.

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most of tourists
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 weather on the island. The minority of respondents Did you mean "dislikes"?dislikes
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 poor food quality. 