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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. 2dMX
The two maps depict the development of a university campus throughout 2010 and recent day. Overall, the most noticeable change is that the university focuses on more expansion and more student accommodation in number and size and facilities than previously. The most significant change is the university reconstruct student accommodation more extendedly in the north-west of the campus. On the other hand, another student accommodation is replaced with a new building developed for student facilities with shops and offices. Shops that earlier situated in the south of the camps were knockdown for the student's new accommodation. Another major change is teaching block expanded into two different building; one is an art building, and another is a science building which replaces the university offices. The lawn and seating area are removed; however, the lake remains unchanged at the same place. The restaurant demolishes, and a new road constructs for better connectivity.
The two maps depict the development of a
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university
campus throughout 2010 and recent day.

Overall
, the most noticeable
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change
is that the
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university
focuses on more expansion and more
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student
accommodation in number and size and facilities than previously.

The most significant
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change
is the
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reconstruct
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student
accommodation more
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extendedly
in the north-west of the campus.
On the other hand
, another
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student
accommodation
is replaced
with a new
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building
developed for
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student
facilities with shops and offices. Shops that earlier situated in the south of the camps were knockdown for the student's new accommodation.

Another major
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change
is teaching block expanded into two
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different
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building
; one is an art
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building
, and another is a science
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building
which replaces the
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university
offices. The lawn and seating area
are removed
;
however
, the lake remains unchanged at the same place. The restaurant demolishes, and a new road constructs for better connectivity.

IELTS academic The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

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4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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