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summerize the informations and make comparison where relevant

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The fisrt graph provides dara about the amount of seafood importations in the United states during 3 different years 1986, 1996 and 2016, along with their expectation for 2026. While the second infographic gives details about the various countries that exported seafood to the US in 2016. Overall, over the span of the given period, it is clear that seafood imports in the US experienced a significant increase. Meanwhile, projection is that importations will undergo a slight drop in 2026. Regarding the biggest seafood exporters, China, Thailand and Canada accounted for the highest percentages in 2016. In 1986, the US imported just over 5 billion Us dollars in terms of seafood, this figure kept climbing gradually to reach 10 and 20 billion dollars in 1996 and 2016 respectively. In the meantime, it is predicted that seafood importations will drop moderatly to under 20 billion dollars by 2026. In terms of seafood sources, in 2016, the US imported the largest volume of its conumption from China which accounted for 28% of the total of imports, while Thailand and Canada made up for 23% and 16% respectively. In the other hand, Ecuador, Vietnam and Indonisia represented the smallest proportions of importations with 11% for Vietnam and 8% for both other former countries.

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 from China which accounted for 28% of the total of imports, while Thailand and Canada made up for 23% and 16% respectively
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