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table of about income sources of students below the age of 26-year in England from 1988 to 1999.

table of about income sources of students below the age of 26-year in England from 1988 to 1999. b5R3
The table above gives the information about income sources of students below the age of 26-year in England from 1988 to 1999. The information measured in percentages. Overall, all income of students increased gradually from 4, 398 pounds in 1988/98 to 5, 575 pounds in 1998/99. During the ten-year period, there was no income in student loan in 1988/99 but it was rapidly increased from zero to 24% during the year. Money from parental contribution went down approximately 6% from 32% to 16% each year. Getting money from grant in 1998 to 1993 stood at 38%. However, it also showed slightly decreased of 5% in the next year and stopped at 16% in 1998/99. On the other hand, students who earned money as their income sources slowly increased every year. Although it was just rose by 1% in 1988 to 1993, it went up 14% in 1995/96 and it was a 2% steady fall in the last year. Money from other sources considerably changed in each year, the lowest percentages was in 21 percent in 1992/93 but in 1998/99 show the peak at 34%.
The table above gives the information about
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income
sources of
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students
below the age of
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26-year
in England from 1988 to 1999. The information measured in percentages.

Overall
, all
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income
of
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students
increased
gradually
from 4,
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398 pounds
in 1988/98 to 5,
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575 pounds
in 1998/99.

During the ten-year period, there was no
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income
in
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student
loan in 1988/99
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but
it was
rapidly
increased from zero to 24% during the
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year
.
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Money
from parental contribution went down approximately 6% from 32% to 16% each
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year
. Getting
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money
from grant in 1998 to 1993 stood at 38%.
However
, it
also
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showed
slightly
decreased of 5% in the
next
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year
and
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stopped
at 16% in 1998/99.

On the other hand
,
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students
who earned
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money
as their
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income
sources
slowly
increased every
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year
. Although it was
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just
rose by 1% in 1988 to 1993, it went up 14% in 1995/96 and it was a 2% steady fall in the last
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year
.
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Money
from other sources
considerably
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changed
in each
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year
, the lowest percentages was in 21 percent in 1992/93
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but
in 1998/99
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show
the peak at 34%.
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IELTS academic table of about income sources of students below the age of 26-year in England from 1988 to 1999.

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4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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