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Number of arrests per year for using drugs

Number of arrests per year for using drugs EAQq

The provided line graph describes the information about how many people were arrested because of utilizing drugs that were not legal. Overall, it is conspicuous from the graph that despite some fluctuations, the number of arrests rose over the period as a whole and in 2000 it reached a peak. First of all, the number of arrested people stood at 10 in 1991. However, over the three following years, there was a steady increase to approximately 22. 1995 saw a dramatic growth to 60 in the arrest rate, which was followed by a stability during the next two years. From 1998 to 1999 there was a gradual fall to less than 40. Following this, the figures peaked at 70 in 2000, in contrast to 2001, where it hit a low of 15. The period from 2003 to 2004 experienced a dramatic fluctuation in the number of arrests, which was followed by a decline to 40 in 2005.

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describes
 the information about how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
were arrested
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of utilizing drugs that were not legal.

Overall
, it is conspicuous from the graph that despite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations, the number of arrests rose over the period as a whole and in 2000 it reached a peak.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the number of arrested This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 stood at 10 in 1991. However
, over the three following years, there was a steady increase to approximately 22. 1995 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a dramatic growth to 60 in the arrest rate, which was followed
 by a stability during the next
 two years. From 1998 to 1999 there was a gradual fall to less than 40.

Following this, the figures peaked at 70 in 2000, in contrast
 to 2001, where it hit a low of 15. The period from 2003 to 2004 experienced a dramatic fluctuation in the number of arrests, which was followed
 by a decline to 40 in 2005. 