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The two pie charts are highlighting information on the main positive points and negative points of Fairmont Island, based on an evaluation done on its tourists.

The two pie charts are highlighting information on the main positive points and negative points of Fairmont Island, based on an evaluation done on its tourists. Xq7d8
The two pie charts are highlighting information on the main positive points and negative points of Fairmont Island, based on an evaluation done on its tourists. Overall, it stands out at first glance that the most important strength of this location is its people, while the highest proportion of respondents declared weather as their main reason of dissatisfaction. Regarding details, with respect to strong points of this tourism destination, two fifth of those participating in the survey said that they loved weather there that was not quit as low as the percentage for those choosing scenery as their favored feature at 37%. Considerably lower portions of those filling questionnaire were insisting on culture and good accommodation as its plus points constituting only 12% and 11% of the whole, respectively. As for drawbacks of this island, marginally less than half of participants in the assessment chose weather as their most hated trait when visiting Fairmont Island. Next in the list was entertainment at 30, which was nowhere near as high as for the weather. The most insignificant factor (among these four) hindering people from being attracted to this island was food quality at just 5%, which was four times as low as percentage of people pointing to high cost of living as weakness of this site at a fifth of people in this study.
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of Fairmont
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, based on an evaluation done on its tourists.

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, while the highest proportion of respondents declared
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as their main reason of dissatisfaction.

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of this tourism destination, two fifth of those participating in the survey said that they
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there that was not quit as low as the percentage for those choosing scenery as their favored feature at 37%.
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accommodation as its plus
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as their most hated trait when visiting Fairmont
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weather
. The most insignificant factor (among these four) hindering
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was food quality at
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pointing to high cost of living as weakness of this site at a fifth of
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in this study.
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IELTS academic The two pie charts are highlighting information on the main positive points and negative points of Fairmont Island, based on an evaluation done on its tourists.

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