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Nutrients Consumed by USA People

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The charts illustrate the percentage of the nutrients derived from the foods which are taken by average humans in the USA. Nutrients are subjected to bad if consumed in excess. Overall, sodium, saturated fat are most absorbed during dinner, while added sugar most absorbed at snack time. All nutrients such as sodium, satuarted fat, and added sugar are least taken by the body at breakfast. The sodium intake while taking the dinner is at 43 percentage which is almost similar to the added sugar percentage intake that is 42%, where the sodium with 14%, saturated fat with 14% are also absorbed while consuming snacks. The sodium intake percentage is 29% similiarly saturated fat with 26% are found to be almost similiar absortption for the lunch. The intake of different nutrients such as sodium(14%), saturated fat(16%) and added sugar(16%) are seen about similiar nutrients absorption at breakfast.
The charts illustrate the
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, sodium,
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saturated
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fat
are most absorbed during dinner, while
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added
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sugar
most
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snack time. All
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nutrients
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satuarted
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fat
, and
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added
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sugar
are least taken by the body at breakfast.

The sodium
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intake
while taking the dinner is at 43
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which is almost similar to the
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added
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sugar
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42%, where the sodium with 14%,
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saturated
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fat
with 14% are
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intake
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is 29%
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similiarly
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saturated
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with 26%
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nutrients
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saturated
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fat(16%)
and
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added
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sugar(16%)
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absorption at breakfast.
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IELTS academic Nutrients Consumed by USA People

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