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behind tokyo are Paris and London with 850 and 548 kilometers respectively while Los Angeles and Washington DC are second with 90 and 70 millions respectively.

behind tokyo are Paris and London with 850 and 548 kilometers respectively while Los Angeles and Washington DC are second with 90 and 70 millions respectively. WngPD
The table shows the analysis for six cities about subway systems around the world. London is the first completed city, and the second one is Paris. Los Angeles is latest city, and second is Kyoto London also has a longest distance about 1100 kilometers while Kyoto has a shortest system about 11 kilometers and equal 1/10 compared with London. The gap between the two longest distances is about a second-double while two shortest only have three kilometers. While the remaining 2 countries are 114 and 149 kilometers respectively. It’s surprising that Kyoto is also the city with the lowest number of transit passengers, at 11 million people a year while Tokyo outperforms by nearly 13 times and is also the city with the largest number of passengers in the table. Behind Tokyo are Paris and London with 850, 548 millions respectively while Los Angeles and Washington DC are second with 90 and 70 millions respectively
The table
shows
the analysis for six
cities
about subway systems around the world.

London is the
first
completed city, and the second one is Paris.

Los Angeles is
latest
city, and second is Kyoto

London
also
has
a
longest distance about 1100 kilometers while Kyoto has
a
shortest system about 11 kilometers and equal 1/10 compared with London. The gap between the two longest distances is about a second-double while two shortest
only
have three kilometers. While the remaining 2 countries are 114 and 149 kilometers
respectively
.

It’s surprising that Kyoto is
also
the city with the lowest number of transit passengers, at 11 million
people
a year while Tokyo outperforms by
nearly
13 times and is
also
the city with the largest number of passengers in the table. Behind Tokyo are Paris and London with 850, 548 millions
respectively
while Los Angeles and Washington DC are second with 90 and 70 millions
respectively
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