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The given bar graph depicts the information about how a number of houses were constructed in two cities Namely, Derbly and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009 Overall, It is lucid that the trend built houses in Derby dramatically increased each year.

The given bar graph depicts the information about how a number of houses were constructed in two cities Namely, Derbly and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009 Overall, It is lucid that the trend built houses in Derby dramatically increased each year. bx393
The given bar graph depicts the information about how a number of houses were constructed in two cities Namely, Derbly and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009 Overall, It is lucid that the trend built houses in Derby dramatically increased each year. While. In Nottingham shows fluctuated trend per year. Moving to detail, nearly 50 number of houses were built in Derby however, exactly 5o number of residence were in Nottingham in 2000. The Trend of built houses in Derby evaluated from 2008 to 2009. In comparison, with, the number of houses in Derby, which witnessed as a dramatic increase to 75 in 2002, the number of houses established in Nottingham plummeted to 20 number at this time. Proving further. In 2003 to till 2007 the same number of houses were constructed in Derby and showed stability. On the contrary, more than 50 number of houses were built in Nottingham in 2004. An akin situation can be noticed in 2009, the trend of construct houses in Derby touched peak point at 350 number. In 2009, there was saw an increase in the number of houses built in Nottingham.
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IELTS academic The given bar graph depicts the information about how a number of houses were constructed in two cities Namely, Derbly and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009 Overall, It is lucid that the trend built houses in Derby dramatically increased each year.

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