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the two pie chart shows change sin world population by region between 1990 and 2000.summarise the information by choosing relevant information and make comparisions

The pie chart describes the percentage of change in number of human population on the planet in different regions, from the year 1990 to 2000. Overall, there have been a huge increase in the number of population on the planet over 10 years. Also, most of the population growth has occurred in developing countries. As presented in the chart, Asia had the highest proportion of population in 1900 which accounted for more than half of the humans (60%) which decreased to 54% in 2000. In addition, Europe which was the second highest populated had one-fourth population in 1990 which decreased to 14% in 2000. On the other hand, Africa and Latin America showed a rise in proportion of human. During 1990 Africa and North America had 4. 5% and 3% respectively which climbed to 10% and 5% consecutively in 2000. Similarly, others also had a minor rise in population to reach 3% in 2000 whereas, North America showed no change in percentage over the period.
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change
in number of human
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population
on the planet in
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regions, from the year 1990 to 2000.

Overall
, there have been a huge increase in the number of
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population
on the planet over 10 years.
Also
, most of the
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population
growth has occurred in
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developing countries
.

As presented in the chart, Asia had the highest proportion of
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population
in 1900 which accounted for more than half of the humans (60%) which decreased to 54% in 2000.
In addition
, Europe which was the second highest populated had one-fourth
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population
in 1990 which decreased to 14% in 2000.

On the other hand
, Africa and Latin America
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showed
a rise in proportion of human. During 1990 Africa and North America had 4. 5% and 3%
respectively
which climbed to 10% and 5%
consecutively
in 2000.
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, others
also
had a minor rise in
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population
to reach 3% in 2000 whereas, North America
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in percentage over the period.
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IELTS academic the two pie chart shows change sin world population by region between 1990 and 2000.

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