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The line graph illustrates the statistical data about complaints regards to noise which was filed to environment health authorities in Newton from 1980 to 1996.

The line graph illustrates the statistical data about complaints regards to noise which was filed to environment health authorities in Newton from 1980 to 1996. Overall, it can be readily apparent that the noise objections due to domestic or household were decline over the year. Whereas, noise complaints about road works were at peak point. To begin with, the number of grievances about domestic were highest as compared to others, which was almost 700 in 1980. Moreover, this trend rapidly decreases up to 1994 at about 100 and then it was remain intact to 1996. While, the complaints relates to the road works were approximately 500 and this was almost remain unchanged up to 1988 with small fluctuation. Additionally, this trend was drastically upsurge more than 1400 complaints were made in 1996. Furthermore, the noise complaints about factories were far more than traffic noises which was roughly 300 in the initial years. In addition to that this trend was increased gradually up to 1990 at around 750 and this was moderately decreased up to 1996 to approximately 500. Interestingly, the objections relates to the traffic noise were fluctuate to 1990 at about 410. However, this was show a gradual increased to 100 in 1996.
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objections due to domestic or household were decline over the year.
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,
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noise
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about road works were at peak point. To
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with, the number of grievances about domestic were highest as compared to others, which was almost 700 in 1980.
Moreover
, this trend
rapidly
decreases up to 1994 at about 100 and then it was
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relates to the road works were approximately 500 and this was almost remain unchanged up to 1988 with
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small
fluctuation.
Additionally
, this trend was
drastically
upsurge more than 1400
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complaints
were made
in 1996.
Furthermore
, the
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noise
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complaints
about factories were far more than traffic
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noises
which was roughly 300 in the initial years.
In addition
to that this trend
was increased
gradually
up to 1990 at around 750 and this was
moderately
decreased up to 1996 to approximately 500.
Interestingly
, the objections relates to the traffic
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noise
were
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fluctuate
to 1990 at about 410.
However
, this was
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a gradual increased to 100 in 1996.
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