Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The line graph is showing consumption of the products of wood in the UK in year 1994 to 2008and it is explaning the three different kings of wood goods.

Over all is clear that all wood based products were used only 100 percent in year 1994 between 2008 consumption of 3 wood goods were decreased. To begin with the stocking feature of the graph is that there had been wide fluctuations in the usage of all products. In 1994 wood products had started consumption 100 present. In 1996 sawn wood consumption had declined only 75 persent and wood based panels had dropped into 92 present but as compared two wood goods the paper wood products were being rocked up above 110 present. In 2002 between 2004 consumption of wood 3 products had been again climbed. In year 2008 sawn wood had sharply dropped only 85 present consumption and panels wood consumption was dowing fell and some year paper wood had decreased
Over all is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
100 percent in year 1994 between 2008
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumption
of 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
were decreased
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with the stocking feature of the graph is that there had been wide fluctuations in the usage of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
. In 1994
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumption
100
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
. In 1996 sawn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumption
had declined
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
75
Possible spelling mistake found.
persent
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
based panels had dropped into 92
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
as compared two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
the paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
were
being rocked
up above 110
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
2002 between 2004
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumption
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
had been again climbed.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
year 2008 sawn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
had
sharply
dropped
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
85
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumption
and panels
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consumption
was
Possible spelling mistake found.
dowing
fell and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Did you mean "years"?
year
paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wood
had
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
decreased
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The line graph is showing consumption of the products of wood in the UK in year 1994 to 2008and it is explaning the three different kings of wood goods.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The line graph is showing consumption of the products of wood in the UK in year 1994 to 2008and it is explaning the three different kings of wood goods.