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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph gives an overview of the numbers of visitors choosing the stay at a hotel and a cruise from 2010 to 2017. Overall, despite having some fluctuations, the number of tourists visiting the Caribbean island had undergo a gradual increase over a 7-year period. The number of visitors staying at a cruise ship stood at around 0. 75 million in 2010. It had remained 0. 75 million until 2011. 2011 to 2013 saw a gradual growth in numbers of visitors from 0. 75 million to 1. 5 million, and the numbers had remained the same until 2015. There was a slight drop in numbers to approximately 1. 25 million in 2016 but it bounced back to 1. 5 million in 2017. Unlike the former, where numbers have stayed the same for most of the time, the number of visitors staying on island had been raising since 2010. It stood at 0. 25 million at 2010 and had undergo some fluctuations until 2013, but after 2013, the numbers had rose drastically, from 0. 5 million to 2 million in 2017. In summary, the number of people choosing to stay on a cruise ship and island have increased over 7 years. While the former had remained constant for most of the time, the latter had rosed significantly.
The line graph gives an overview of the
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choosing the stay at a hotel and a cruise from 2010 to 2017.
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fluctuations, the
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of tourists visiting the Caribbean island had
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a gradual increase over a 7-year period.

The
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of
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staying at a cruise ship stood at around 0. 75
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in 2010. It had remained 0. 75
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until 2011. 2011 to 2013
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a gradual growth in
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of
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from 0. 75
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to 1. 5
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, and the
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had remained the same until 2015. There was a slight drop in
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to approximately 1. 25
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in 2016
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it bounced back to 1. 5
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in 2017.

Unlike the former, where
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have stayed the same for most of the time, the
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of
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staying on island had been raising since 2010. It stood at 0. 25
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at 2010 and had
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fluctuations until 2013,
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after 2013, the
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had
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rose
drastically
, from 0. 5
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to 2
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in 2017.

In summary, the
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choosing to stay on a cruise ship and island have increased over 7 years. While the former had remained constant for most of the time, the latter had
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rosed
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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