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The two pie chart represent the proportion of comparative workforce

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The two pie chart represent the proportion of comparative workforce distribution in Great Britain between 1932 and 1992. The types of workforce distribution are divided into industry, government, agriculture and fishing, services and unemployment. Overall, There was a significant difference in each workforce. According to the pie charts, it can be seen that the highest percentage of people employed was an industry, with the figure being 46% in 1932. Additionally, unemployment was responsibled for the second highest number of workfoce.
The two pie chart represent the proportion of comparative workforce distribution in Great Britain between 1932 and 1992. The types of workforce distribution
are divided
into industry,
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government
, agriculture and fishing, services and unemployment.
Overall
, There was a significant difference in each workforce.

According to the pie charts, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the highest percentage of
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people
employed was an industry, with the figure being 46% in 1932.
Additionally
, unemployment was
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responsibled
for the second highest number of
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workfoce
.
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IELTS academic The two pie chart represent the proportion of comparative workforce

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