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the charts below show local govenment expenditure in 2010 and 2015. summarise the information.

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The pie charts reveal the information about the expenditure which spends by local authorities on various sectors namely education, healthcare, pensions, defence, welfare, interest on borrowing, transport, culture and leisure and others between 2010 and 2015. Calibration of data is done in percentage. From an over-all perception, it is immensely clear that the education and healthcare sector were more favorable sectors by government however, borrowing and transport showed the increasing trend throughout the period. In detail, in 2010, government spent almost quarterly (24%) money on educational system. Over the following five years, it declined slightly by 3%. The proportion of healthcare funding was approximately same in both years with the difference of 1% while the expenditure on pensions remained same. Probing further, The others sectors were much smaller. Government considered defence division as fourth sector which was slighty lower than pensions (17%) in 2010, it fell down by 4 % till 2015. Moreover, the percentage of expenditure on borrowing and transport increased from 5% and 8% to 10% and 13% from 2010 to 2015 respectively.
The pie charts reveal the information about the expenditure which spends by local authorities on various
sectors
namely
education, healthcare, pensions,
defence
, welfare, interest on borrowing, transport, culture and leisure
and others
between 2010 and 2015. Calibration of data
is done
in percentage.

From an over-all perception, it is
immensely
clear
that the education and healthcare
sector
were more favorable
sectors
by
government
however
, borrowing and transport
showed
the increasing trend throughout the period.

In detail, in 2010,
government
spent almost quarterly (24%) money on educational system. Over the following five years, it declined
slightly
by 3%. The proportion of healthcare funding was approximately same in both years with the difference of 1% while the expenditure on pensions remained same.

Probing
further
, The others
sectors
were much smaller.
Government
considered
defence
division as fourth
sector
which was
slighty
lower than pensions (17%) in 2010, it fell down by 4 % till 2015.
Moreover
, the percentage of expenditure on borrowing and transport increased from 5% and 8% to 10% and 13% from 2010 to 2015
respectively
.
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