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The two maps illustrate the developments that have taken place in Felixstone over a period of 34 years between 1967 and 2001.

The two maps illustrate the developments that have taken place in Felixstone over a period of 34 years between 1967 and 2001. aw3R9
The two maps illustrate the developments that have taken place in Felixstone over a period of 34 years between 1967 and 2001. Overall, it is clear that Feixstone underwent a dramatic transformation over the period, becoming noticeably green and more built. One change that stands out was that there has been a significant redeveloped over the period. The shops in the east of high street were replaced with a new complex of apartments. The farmland was demolished and the surrounding area was redeveloped with hotel, a swimming pool and with tennis courts. Another noticeable change was that near the hotel constructed to the south of the golf course, was developed a car park. The pier that led to the sea was removed, although the dunes, the café, the golf course the shops and the hotel were still there.
The two maps illustrate the developments that have taken place in
Felixstone
over a period of 34 years between 1967 and 2001.

Overall
, it is
clear
that
Feixstone
underwent a dramatic transformation over the period, becoming
noticeably
green and more built.

One
change
that stands out was that there has been a significant redeveloped over the period. The shops in the east of high street
were replaced
with a new complex of apartments. The farmland
was demolished
and the surrounding area
was redeveloped
with hotel, a swimming pool and with tennis courts.

Another noticeable
change
was that near the hotel constructed to the south of the golf course,
was developed
a car park. The pier that led to the sea
was removed
, although the dunes, the café, the golf course the shops and the hotel were
still
there.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate the developments that have taken place in Felixstone over a period of 34 years between 1967 and 2001.

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