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The bar chart illustrates whole of time expend by persons in single country (UK), divided into three different types of phone call from 1995 to 2002.

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The bar chart illustrates whole of time expend by persons in single country (UK), divided into three different types of phone call from 1995 to 2002. As can be seen from bar chart That calls made local, fixed line were widely enjoyed categories, in terms of total usage. The deepest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, However this type also saw the most exponential rise in user minutes. In 1995, In UK fixed line used for overall of over 70 billion minutes for local calls by people. Approximately half of that amount of time for national or internationals calls. Mobile phones were a mere used for some 4 billion minutes. Next four years, All types of telephone calls climbed gradually. In 1999, Spent time on local calls using phone line had achieve a top at 90 billion minutes. Two types of telephone call only rise and continued. But Local calls slip, then It can’t increase. In 2002, how many minutes International and national calls reach 60 billion and Mobile call climbed to about 45 billion minutes.

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