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The bar chart graph below shows the number of various types of cars in democratic republic of Congo in thrre different years

The bar chart graph below shows the number of various types of cars in democratic republic of Congo in thrre different years n6rR2
The bar chart illustrates number of car used by people of democratic republic of Congo over three various years. Here, data of SUVs, sedans, mini-vans, and hatch-backs given of year 2005, 2010 and year 2015. Overall, the usage of SUVs and sedans were increased considerably during time while mini-vans and hatch-backs consumption declined. Mini-vans and hatch-backs were at their pick during year and in year 2015 mini-vans experienced a district fall. Fewer down fall was also noticed in hatch-backs usage. In staring year 2005 number of SUVs was 1000 and in the year 2015 it reached around 4500. 3500 SUVs has increased in 10 years. Number of sedan cars was remain highest in all years. It was around 4600, 5900, 8000 respectively. Mini-vans was the lowest by the number in year 2015 in compare to the other three cars. Hatch-backs has not shown a too much change in 15 years. In conclude, sedan and SUVs number were increased by the time while mini-vans and hatch-backs showed up-down in 15 years. They were highest in 2010.
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of democratic republic of Congo over three various years. Here, data of
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,
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, mini-vans, and hatch-backs
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2005, 2010 and
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2015.
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SUVs
and
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were increased
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and in
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2015 mini-vans experienced a district fall. Fewer down fall was
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noticed in hatch-backs usage. In staring
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2005
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number
of
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SUVs
was 1000 and in the
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2015 it reached around 4500. 3500
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cars was
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highest in all years. It was around 4600, 5900, 8000
respectively
. Mini-vans was the lowest by the
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2015 in compare to the other three cars. Hatch-backs has not shown a too much
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in 15 years. In conclude,
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were increased
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up-down in 15 years. They were highest in 2010.
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IELTS academic The bar chart graph below shows the number of various types of cars in democratic republic of Congo in thrre different years

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