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The two maps shows the development of the village of Stake ford in 1930 and 2010.

The two maps shows the development of the village of Stake ford in 1930 and 2010. eaNp

The two maps shows the development of the village of Stake ford in 1930 and 2010. It can be inferred form the maps that the village has been extended and improved with much more facilities to the citizens. Firstly, the number of key houses has been increased. A previous farmland was destroyed and new houses have been built. The large house which is right side to bridge consists of a garden, that is removed and changed in to retirement house. There was a farm land in 1930 between the bridge and primary school. Destroyed the farmland and renovated the primary school by adding number of rooms. The shops are removed. However the post office and River Stoke has been remained same

The two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the development of the village of Stake ford in 1930 and 2010. It can be inferred
 form the maps that the village has been extended
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 with much more facilities to the citizens. Firstly
, the number of key You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 has been increased
. A previous farmland was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 have been built
. The large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 which is right side to bridge consists of a garden, that is removed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in to retirement You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. There was a farm land in 1930 between the bridge and primary school. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
Destroyed
 the farmland and renovated the primary school by adding number of rooms. The shops are removed
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 the post office and River Stoke has been remained
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsame.same!same?same:same,same;
same