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The graph below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.

The graph below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000. E8bQ

The bar graph depicts the number of members had a fitness members according to gender from 1970 to 2000. Unit measures in thousands. Observing the details, just over the 2000 men had fitness membership in 1970 and then, this figure rose dramatically by exact 4000 in the next five years. Before this ratio again increased and stood by 5000 in 1995, it declined significantly and accounted for less than 2000 in 1985. In addition, after 1995, there was a remarkable drop observed in male's fitness membership and reached at 2000 in the end of the period. Focusing on the female fitness membership, it started from 1000 in 1970; whereas, this figure doubled in 1975 and stood by 2000. After that, it followed fluctuated trend till 1995 and accounted for less than 3000. Surprisingly, the women's membership had doubled as compared with men's membership in 2000. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, both gender experienced a fluctuation zone during the given period of time. Also, females were more active than males in the end of the period by 2000.

The bar graph depicts the number of members had a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigorstrengthhealth
fitness
 members according to gender from 1970 to 2000. Unit measures in thousands.

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just
 over the 2000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigorstrengthhealth
fitness
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membership
 in 1970 and then, this figure rose dramatically
 by exact 4000 in the next
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Before
 this ratio again increased and stood by 5000 in 1995, it declined significantly
 and accounted for less than 2000 in 1985. In addition
, after 1995, there was a remarkable drop observed in male's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigorstrengthhealth
fitness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 and reached at 2000 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

Focusing on the female You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigorstrengthhealth
fitness
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from 1000 in 1970; whereas, this figure doubled in 1975 and stood by 2000. After that, it followed fluctuated trend till 1995 and accounted for less than 3000. Surprisingly
, the women's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 had doubled as compared with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenrollmentparticipation
membership
 in 2000.

Overall
, it can be clearly
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seen
 that, both gender experienced a fluctuation zone during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period of time. Also
, females were more active than males in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period by 2000. 