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This particular diagrams illustrate the phases and instrument apply in the coment-constructing process.

This particular diagrams illustrate the phases and instrument apply in the coment-constructing process. oKGK
This particular diagrams illustrate the phases and instrument apply in the coment-constructing process. It also indicate how the cennent is take to release concrete for building purposes. In the case of of comand Production, there are numbers of in gredends. used like limestone, Clay, mixer and so on. In the process of cement Production, first and foremost raw materials like limestone and Clay are ped into the crusher to make Poweder and then put it again inside the mixer. Rotating heater heat the powder and pour un it into Grinder coment Powder is ready to use. And finally Cement after grindering put in bags. and Powder In the procefs of Concrete Production, 15% of cement, 10% water, 25% of Sond and 50% OF Gravel Put incite the concrete mixer. Graver so carred small stones is used in highest percentage and follow by sand 25% which is just half of grave, used.
This particular diagrams illustrate the phases and instrument apply

in the
coment-constructing
process. It
also
indicate
how the
cennent
is

take to release concrete for building purposes.

In the case
of of
comand
Production, there are numbers of in
gredends
.

used
like limestone, Clay, mixer and
so
on. In the process of cement

Production,
first
and foremost

raw materials like limestone and Clay are

ped
into the crusher to
make
Poweder
and then put it again inside

the mixer. Rotating heater heat the powder and pour
un
it into

Grinder
coment
Powder is ready to
use
. And
finally
Cement

after
grindering
put in bags.

and


Powder

In the

procefs
of Concrete Production, 15% of cement, 10% water,

25% of
Sond
and 50% OF Gravel Put incite the

concrete mixer.

Graver
so
carred
small
stones is
used
in
highest
percentage and follow

by sand 25% which is
just
half of grave,
used
.
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