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The two maps show the development of a university campus from 2010 to the present day.

The two maps show the development of a university campus from 2010 to the present day. ka3K

The two maps show the development of a university campus from 2010 to the present day. It can be seen from the maps that the campus has been improved and extended, with much more student accommodation and facilities than previously. Firstly, the number of student accommodation buildings has been increased in number and size. A previous accommodation block south of the lake has been destroyed and replaced by a new building for students, which includes shops and offices. In addition, the teaching facilities have been extended. The previous single teaching block has been changed into a block only for arts subjects and there is a new building for the sciences to the north of the campus. This has replaced the old university offices. The lawn and outside seating area which were next to the lake have been removed. The lake, however, has remained and is still the central point of the campus.

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show
 the development of a university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
 from 2010 to the present day. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the maps that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 and extended, with much more student accommodation and facilities than previously.

Firstly
, the number of student accommodation buildings has been increased
 in number and size. A previous accommodation block south of the lake has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and replaced by a new building for students, which includes shops and offices. In addition
, the teaching facilities have been extended
. The previous single teaching block has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a block This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for arts subjects and there is a new building for the sciences to the north of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
. This has replaced the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 university offices. The lawn and outside seating area which were next
 to the lake have been removed
. The lake, however
, has remained and is still
 the central point of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
. 