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The two maps show the road access to city hospital road in the years 2007 and 2010.

The two maps show the road access to city hospital road in the years 2007 and 2010. AjYOX

The given couple of maps elucidate, the route to reach city hospital by road in two distinctive years 2007 and 2010. In the passage, elaborate details were given including its developments. In the general view, there are three different roads on the map which remained unchanged but its overall appearance has modified by adding bus station and roundabouts on either side of the hospital roads. In addition, the staff car park is replaced adjacent to the hospital road. In the year 2007, the city hospital has a ring road around its perimeter with a Bus stop locating at the Northeast corner, which in later years is shifted to the South-west corner left to the hospital road. Furthermore, there is a public car parking lot that got separated and allocated a space on the right of the city hospital which is no provided in the past. After renovating the roads, the designers had constructed two roundabouts; one at the corner of the city road and the other at the bottom of the city hospital. The roundabouts are working as a connector to bus stations from city and hospital roads. Finally, the staff 4-wheeler parking space is created above the city road.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 couple of maps elucidate, the route to reach city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in two distinctive years 2007 and 2010. In the passage, elaborate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 including its developments.

In the general view, there are three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 on the map which remained unchanged This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 its overall
 appearance has modified by adding bus station and roundabouts on either side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 addition, the staff car park is replaced
 adjacent to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 road.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the year 2007, the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 has a ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 around its perimeter with a Bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 locating at the Northeast corner, which in later years is shifted
 to the South-west corner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. Furthermore
, there is a public car parking lot that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 separated and allocated a space on the right of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 which is no provided in the past.

After renovating the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
, the designers had constructed two roundabouts; one at the corner of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and the other at the bottom of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. The roundabouts are working as a connector to bus stations from city and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
. Finally
, the staff 4-wheeler parking space is created
 above the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. 