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Task one essay map about tourism zone

Task one essay map about tourism zone 7aBob
The two map illustrate a place surrounded with ocen its produce of its construction for tourism. As it can be seen the island has never been inhabited before, but the nature of the island is very gorgeous and the air is very clear. Especially, when the sea surrounding the island is rippling and the palm trees on the island give it a special charm. For this reason, over the years, a tourist zone was established on the island. It is a large and beautiful restaurant for local people and tourists. At the same time, a reception was built to process the documents of tourists visiting the island and to provide information about the opportunities created for tourists on the island. The probable feature of the island is that the island has a separate road for pedestrians and vehicles, which is very convenient for pedestrians and drivers. And the magnificent sailing ships serve as an exciting voyage for tourists across the blue sea.
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its produce of its construction for tourism. As it can be
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seen
the
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island
has never
been inhabited
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before
,
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but
the nature of the
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island
is
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very
gorgeous and the air is
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very
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clear
.
Especially
, when the sea surrounding the
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island
is rippling and the palm trees on the
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island
give it a special charm.
For this reason
, over the years, a
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tourist
zone
was established
on the
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island
. It is a large and
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beautiful
restaurant for local
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people
and
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tourists
. At the same time, a reception
was built
to process the documents of
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tourists
visiting the
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island
and to provide information about the opportunities created for
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tourists
on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
. The probable feature of the
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island
is that the
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island
has a separate road for pedestrians and vehicles, which is
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very
convenient for pedestrians and drivers. And the magnificent sailing ships serve as an exciting voyage for
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tourists
across the blue sea.
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IELTS academic Task one essay map about tourism zone

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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