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how much oils do instant noodles have?

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This diagram shows the process of manufacturing instant noodles. we always eat it easily, but the process of manufacturing has so many steps before the instant noodles are eaten. In the process of manufacturing, the oil is used twice. To make the noodles, silos, water and oil are mixed by the machine. This is the first step that oil is used. Then, dough sheets are rollered by the machine. Then, noodles disc are cooked with oil. This is the second step that oil is used.
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the process of manufacturing instant
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the process of manufacturing has
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the instant
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oil
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noodles
, silos, water and
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oil
are mixed
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first
step that
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oil
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. Then, dough sheets are
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rollered
by the machine. Then,
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oil
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IELTS academic how much oils do instant noodles have?

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
85 words
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