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The two maps show the Frenton city in 1990 and changes made in 2012.

The two maps show the Frenton city in 1990 and changes made in 2012. 8aVxm
The specific maps illustrates the information regarding the development of a town called Frenton between 1990 and 2012. Overall, it is vividly seen that, Frenton had modified considerably over the period, which had more buildings instead of trees. In details, playing fields with trees situated in the north and it had demolished. Instead of that, blocks of flats was built. The size of the hospital were expanded. Trees was growing in southwest side whereas, it has been replaced with techno park. In addition, the flats had constructed in North side. The school and library were unaltered in the given period of time. Moving further, it can be noticed that, the bank was vanished. Besides of that, new restaurant was built in 2012 In the east side, cafe and park was transformed with golf course and hotel. In the South side, the theater and shops was replaced with a cinema and supermarket. Houses were reconstructed into blocks of flats.
The specific maps
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illustrates
the information regarding the development of a town called
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Frenton
between 1990 and 2012.

Overall
, it is
vividly
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seen
that,
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Frenton
had modified
considerably
over the period, which had more buildings
instead
of trees.

In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
, playing fields with trees situated in the north and it had demolished.
Instead
of that, blocks of flats
was built
. The size of the hospital
were expanded
. Trees was growing in southwest side whereas, it has
been replaced
with techno park.
In addition
, the flats had constructed in North side. The school and library
were unaltered
in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
period of time.

Moving
further
, it can
be noticed
that, the bank
was vanished
.
Besides
of that, new restaurant
was built
in 2012 In the east side,
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and park
was transformed
with golf course and hotel. In the South side, the theater and shops
was replaced
with a cinema and supermarket.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Houses
were reconstructed
into blocks of flats.
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IELTS academic The two maps show the Frenton city in 1990 and changes made in 2012.

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