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Pie chart showing data of exports from various EU countries to India and China

Pie chart showing data of exports from various EU countries to India and China D6Gwk
There are four pie charts here in which represents the data of exports from EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011. There are many countries which export goods to India has elevated in 2011 when compared to that of 2000. There is a drastic change of UK which fall from 29% to 13%, that is which means it is half that of 2000. Unlike UK, Germany has raised its number in exporting. But rest of the countries almost fluctuate in both India and China. Germany played a vital role in exporting to both the counties with a percentage of 25% and 48% in India and China respectively in 2011, which had upward trend from 15% and 38% respectively in India and China. Initially Italy did not play a good role in exporting to India but it changed it graph later from 7% to 9%. Along with Germany, Belgium also did great in India with 25% and 20% in 2000 and 2011 respectively. In conclusion, we can understand that there are only a few countries got improvement in exporting, while others remained more hover.
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to India and China in 2000 and 2011. There are
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which export
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to India has elevated in 2011 when compared to that of 2000.
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of UK which fall from 29% to 13%,
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.
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rest of the
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almost fluctuate in both India and China. Germany played a vital role in
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exporting
to both the counties with a percentage of 25% and 48% in India and China
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in 2011, which had upward
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from 15% and 38%
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in India and China.
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to India
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it graph later from 7% to 9%. Along with Germany, Belgium
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