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The map layout of Central school in 2005 and 2015.

The map layout of Central school in 2005 and 2015. KnNlk
The given maps depict the information about location of the centrak school's area in 2005 which is reconstracted in 2015. Overall, it can be noticable that the soccer field place was replaced by the audetorium in 2015. At the first glace, It seems obvious that the cental school was situated near the road. The scoccer field in the northen part of campuse in 2005 as changed to auditorioum in new map. The hall also took up half of the parking space in the notha-weasren coroner of the central school campus. Furthermore, the building of the primary section, which was situated next to the assembaly hall extended towards the north in 2005, thus length of primary school was expanded in 2010. The KG section size was reduced and in new map this was located in next to the auditoruim. The only areas that remaind unchanges through the given years were the secoundary section buliding and the other one was assesmbly area which was in south-weasten side and sorthern part of campus respectively.
The
given
maps depict the information about location of the
centrak
school's area in 2005 which is
reconstracted
in 2015.

Overall
, it can be
noticable
that the soccer field place
was replaced
by the
audetorium
in 2015.

At the
first
glace
, It seems obvious that the
cental
school
was situated
near the road. The
scoccer
field in the
northen
part of
campuse
in 2005 as
changed
to
auditorioum
in new map. The hall
also
took up half of the parking space in the
notha-weasren
coroner of the central school campus.
Furthermore
, the building of the primary section, which
was situated
next
to the
assembaly
hall extended towards the north in 2005,
thus
length of primary school
was expanded
in 2010. The KG section size was
reduced
and in new map this
was located
in
next
to the
auditoruim
. The
only
areas that
remaind
unchanges
through the
given
years were the
secoundary
section
buliding
and the other one was
assesmbly
area which was in
south-weasten
side and
sorthern
part of campus
respectively
.
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