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The diagram shows a neighbourhood before and after the construction.

The diagram shows a neighbourhood before and after the construction. k6Qg2
The diagram illustrates the changes before and following the building of Benfield Neighbourhood. Before the construction, there were many trees, a barn, and a cornfield, although many homes are built after it, and a new road is replaced by the fence. Before the construction, the neighbourhood was divided into three areas; the woods were on the left, the cornfield was on the right below, and the settlement area was on the right over the cornfield. There was a road from the south to the north of the Benfield in the middle of the right and left. Cornfield and the settlement region was separated by a fence. There was a barn and a farm in the place that people lived. Throughout the construction of the Benfield, a lot of trees were cut. Moreover, the barn and the cornfield were replaced by new houses, meanwhile, a new road is built between the old cornfield and the settlement area, also the fence is removed. There are quite a few trees is still in the park, though. Park is situated below in the left part of Benfield Neighbourhood. Overall, after building many homes in the neighbourhood, there is still a park so that families can spend time with their family and friends. In addition to this, a new road was constructed in between the old barn and the field.
The diagram illustrates the
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before
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Benfield
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road
is replaced
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Before
the construction, the
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neighbourhood
was divided
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, the cornfield was on the right below, and the settlement area was on the right over the cornfield. There was a
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road
from the south to the north of the
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Benfield
in the middle of the right and
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. Cornfield and the settlement region
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barn
and a farm in the place that
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Throughout the construction of the
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a lot of
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barn
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road
is built
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old
cornfield and the settlement area,
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. There are quite a few trees is
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Overall
, after building
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homes in the
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, there is
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