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the two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

the two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 ggo7
Both maps display road entry to a city hospital of two different years (2007 and 2010)A city hospital is surrounded by the ring road. Hospital road is joined by both the ring road and the city road. There were three bus stops on each sides of the hospital road. To the east of the hospital road, there was a common car parking area for both public and staff. Over the period, there was a construction of two roundabouts and a bus station. At the same time, a public car park was relocated to the east of a city hospital. In 2010, at both ends of the hospital road, there was a development of roundarounds; one intersecting with the ring road and other with the city road. Bus stops were removed and replaced with a bus station to the west of the hospital road which was joined to both roundarounds. To the east, only car parking for staff was located whereas public car parking was relocated to the east to a city hospital.
Both maps display
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entry to a city
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hospital
of two
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different
years (2007 and 2010)A city
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hospital
is surrounded
by the ring
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road
.
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Hospital
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road
is
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joined
by both the ring
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road
and the city
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road
. There were three bus
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stops
on each
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sides
of the
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hospital
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road
. To the east of the
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hospital
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road
, there was a common
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car
parking area for both public and staff. Over the period, there was a construction of two roundabouts and a bus station. At the same time, a public
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car
park
was relocated
to the east of a city
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hospital
. In 2010, at both ends of the
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hospital
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road
, there was a development of
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roundarounds
; one intersecting with the ring
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road
and other with the city
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road
. Bus
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stops
were removed
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hospital
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road
which was
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joined
to both
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roundarounds
. To the east,
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only
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car
parking for staff
was located
whereas public
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car
parking
was relocated
to the east to a city
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IELTS academic the two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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