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the given bar graph illustrates the information about the feud in the transport sector in various vi notions in your country with compared to the you every from 2009 to 2010

the given bar graph illustrates the information about the feud in the transport sector in various vi notions in your country with compared to the you every from 2009 to 2010 Ve1K
The given bar graph illustrates the information about used the fuel in the transport sector in various notions in Europe compared with to the EU average from 2009 to 2010. Overview, people of the Slovakia were used the highest percentage of fuel. However, Greece people were utilized the fuel at lowest ratio in transport sector. To begin with, in 2009, the people of Slovakia City were used near about 9% oil for transport sector. On the contrary, in the next year(2010), only 5. 6 % of people used fuel as compared to the EU average. It was increased by 3 time double in 2009 and 1. 5 time in 2010. The fuel used in the Italy and France was with the same proportion that was 4. 5% and 5. 2% and 3. 8% and 4. 2%, respectively in both years as compared to the EU average this two countries use less fuel. Australia people were used fuel for transport which remains same in the both years with 5. 2%. Spain people were utilized the fuel in transport sector that was 3. 9% and 3. 2%. On the contrary, only Greece city masses was used the lowest percentage of fuel, it was near about 1% and two percentage in 2009 and 2010, respectively. As compared to you have range grease used less fuel for transport system.
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sector in various notions in Europe compared with to the EU average from 2009 to 2010.

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of the Slovakia were
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the highest percentage of
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, Greece
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people
were utilized
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fuel
at lowest ratio in
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transport
sector.

To
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with, in 2009, the
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people
of Slovakia City were
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near about 9% oil for
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, in the
next
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5. 6 % of
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people
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fuel
as compared to the EU average. It
was increased
by 3 time double in 2009 and 1. 5 time in 2010. The
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fuel
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used
in the Italy and France was with the same proportion that was 4. 5% and 5. 2% and 3. 8% and 4. 2%,
respectively
in both years as compared to the EU average this two countries
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less fuel.

Australia
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were
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for
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which remains same in the both years with 5. 2%. Spain
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people
were utilized
the
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fuel
in
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transport
sector that was 3. 9% and 3. 2%.
On the contrary
,
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only
Greece city masses was
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the lowest percentage of
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, it was near about 1% and two percentage in 2009 and 2010,
respectively
. As compared to you have range grease
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less
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system.
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IELTS academic the given bar graph illustrates the information about the feud in the transport sector in various vi notions in your country with compared to the you every from 2009 to 2010

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