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The chart below give information about travel to and from UK ,and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The chart below give information about travel to and from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Dnbk
The rendered live and bar graph illustral delineate about travel to and from the UK and about the popular destinations for UK UK denizens to travel overall the most striking point to be examined that maximum people preferred to visit about than to go outside the country whereas majority of masses want in France throughout the year as it is given in the graph hearly 10 million people visiting abroad countries by uk residents in 1979 after that it increased slightly while coming of overseas students were decreased steadily it was just around 11 millions in 1984• in addition to it after the 1984 visiting of abroad was inclined dramatically it was at the peak approximately 52 millions in 1999 while other was at the bottom probing further just around 11 millions visitors moved France while a few was gone in Turkey it amount nearly 3 millions furthermore close to 4. 5 million went in close to 4. 5 million went in Greece and usa during the years.
The rendered
live
and bar graph
illustral
delineate about travel to and from the UK and about the popular destinations for
UK UK
denizens to travel
overall
the most striking point to
be examined
that maximum
people
preferred to visit
about
than to go outside the country whereas majority of masses want in France throughout the year as it is
given
in the graph
hearly
10
million
people
visiting abroad countries by
uk
residents in 1979 after that it increased
slightly
while coming of overseas students
were decreased
steadily
it was
just
around 11
millions
in 1984•
in addition
to it after the 1984 visiting of abroad
was inclined
dramatically
it was at the peak approximately 52
millions
in 1999 while other was at the bottom probing
further
just
around 11
millions
visitors
moved
France while a few
was gone
in Turkey it
amount
nearly
3
millions
furthermore
close to 4. 5
million
went in close to 4. 5
million
went in Greece and
usa
during the years.
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