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The two maps show Colwick Arts Center in two various stages of development, the first image is prior to construction, the second image is afterwards.

The two maps show Colwick Arts Center in two various stages of development, the first image is prior to construction, the second image is afterwards. mXAOn
The two maps show Colwick Arts Center in two various stages of development, the first image is prior to construction, the second image is afterwards. Overall, the center has experienced a significant modernization, which is expanded and optimized over the period with more facilities are built and reconstructed. In addition, the wasteland is now renovated with the addition of tree and other amenities. In the middle of the inside zone, the operation where concert hall and cinema used to be are replaced with central exhibition field. These two recreational places are now moved to the top-right corner of the center. Another striking change is in the left side, the meeting room is separated into two smaller rooms which is situated in the northwest and replace the snack bar. Moreover, two galleries which used to be located on the right side is moved to the south of the meeting room, while toilet is moved to next to concert hall and transformed into the tiny one. There is also the construction of drama studio which is in the left side of the cinema. The information desk remains the same. Regarding the outside range, the wasteland is converted into the outdoor exhibition and performance space. There is a stage surrounded by plenty of tree. In addition, more tables is available for the audience to take a seat and enjoy the green space.
The two maps
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show
Colwick Arts Center in two various stages of development, the
first
image is prior to construction, the second image is afterwards.

Overall
, the center has experienced a significant modernization, which
is expanded
and optimized over the period with more facilities
are built
and reconstructed.
In addition
, the wasteland is
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now
renovated with the addition of tree and other amenities.

In the middle of the inside zone, the operation where concert hall and cinema
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used
to be
are replaced
with central exhibition field. These two recreational places are
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now
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moved
to the top-right corner of the center. Another striking
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change
is in the
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left
side, the meeting room
is separated
into two smaller rooms which
is situated
in the northwest and replace the snack bar.
Moreover
, two galleries which
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used
to
be located
on the right side is
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moved
to the south of the meeting room, while toilet is
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moved
to
next
to concert hall and transformed into the tiny one. There is
also
the construction of drama studio which is in the
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left
side of the cinema. The information desk remains the same.

Regarding the outside range, the wasteland
is converted
into the outdoor exhibition and performance space. There is a stage surrounded by
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plenty
of tree.
In addition
, more tables is available for the audience to take a seat and enjoy the green space.
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IELTS academic The two maps show Colwick Arts Center in two various stages of development, the first image is prior to construction, the second image is afterwards.

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