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The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities NGxW
The maps indicate an island which has constructed. One map shows before, while other indicate after being constructive. Overall, when we take a look at the maps, we can easily notice that there are significant differences between them. There is not only new added places are amusing, but also the sea is enjoyable for the tourists. Before constructions, beach had almost nothing for having a fun. Merely a few trees and a sea. However, after constructions beach has changed a lot. Firstly, there is a swimming which is noticeable and some accommodation units were added to the east-south of the beach. Secondly, Pier has built there which could be useful for sailing boat or enjoying the view. Thirdly, there is a restaurant in the Noeth and a reception which is surronded by Vehicle track. Finally, footosth is also placed brilliantly for make the people convenient, when they are on ther way to go from one place to another.
The maps indicate an island which has constructed. One map
shows
before
, while other indicate after being constructive.

Overall
, when we take a look at the maps, we can
easily
notice that there are significant differences between them. There is not
only
new
added
places are amusing,
but
also
the sea is enjoyable for the tourists.

Before
constructions, beach had almost nothing for having a fun.
Merely
a few trees and a sea.
However
, after constructions beach has
changed
a lot.
Firstly
, there is a swimming which is noticeable and
some
accommodation units were
added
to the east-south of the beach.
Secondly
, Pier has built there which could be useful for sailing boat or enjoying the view.
Thirdly
, there is a restaurant in the
Noeth
and a reception which is
surronded
by Vehicle
track
.
Finally
,
footosth
is
also
placed
brilliantly
for
make
the
people
convenient, when they are on
ther
way to go from one place to another.
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IELTS academic The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

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  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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