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The graph gives information about the drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given column chart illustrate the drinking habits of the United States citizens, based on their age groups. Overall, the percentage of ex-drinkers were increased significant according to growing age. Although who never drinks were decreasing, compare to ex-drinkers. The highest proportion of those who never drink nearly two thirds was in the youngsters (16 to 24year group). The proportion was decreasing slightly among age. As in the 65 to 74 age group, there were only 40% people whose never drink. However, the percentage of those who had quite drinking tended to increase with age. Only a minority of 16-24 year youngster group were ex-drinker, moreover to approximate nearly a half. On other hand, heavy drinker faced gradually rose and fall down. The 35 to 44 age group show to be the heaviest drinkers approximately more than one in ten of the total. There were a smaller percentage of those in the oldest group as well as in the youngest age group.
The
given
column chart illustrate the drinking habits of the United States citizens, based on their
age
groups.

Overall
, the percentage of ex-drinkers
were increased
significant according to growing
age
. Although who never drinks were decreasing, compare to ex-drinkers.

The highest proportion of those who never drink
nearly
two thirds was in the youngsters (16 to 24year
group)
. The proportion was decreasing
slightly
among
age
. As in the 65 to 74
age
group
, there were
only
40%
people
whose never drink.

However
, the percentage of those who had quite drinking tended to increase with
age
.
Only
a minority of 16-24 year youngster
group
were ex-drinker,
moreover
to approximate
nearly
a half.

On other hand, heavy drinker faced
gradually
rose and fall down. The 35 to 44
age
group
show
to be the heaviest drinkers approximately more than one in ten of the total. There were a smaller percentage of those in the oldest
group
as well
as in the youngest
age
group
.
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IELTS academic The graph gives information about the drinking habits of the US population by age.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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