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How a wave energy machine simulates.

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The above process diagrams demonstrate how a wave energy machine simulates and named the parts of a wave energy machine. And also given where a machine can work accurately and its location options. Overall, The diagram illustrates the process and function of a wave energy machine and the location that suits this machine where it can work accurately. To begin with, Place the bottom chamber of the wave energy machine under the sea level and another chamber which consists of a turbine should be placed above the sea level. The direction of the wave should be towards the machine. when a wave hits the machine the water level reaches the bottom chamber the airflow produced by the wave move towards the turbine. Here turbine rotates in a clockwise direction where the air moves towards the open channel and for the cooling process, there will be a filter that pushes air towards the turbine during this process the energy produced from the turbine will secure in the electricity generator. After this, Location options for wave energy machines are should be placed only in seas where tides forms frequently. and this should be placed onshore side of the sea in between where large waves and small waves produce. The starting side gives the low output due to small waves and installation costs are low compared to where large waves from the depth of sea level were high and installation costs are also high as it produces high outputs. In conclusion, it is the procedure of how a wave energy machine simulates and where it should be placed.
The above
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diagrams demonstrate how a
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wave
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energy
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machine
simulates and named the parts of a
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wave
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energy
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machine
. And
also
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where a
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can work
accurately
and its location options.

Overall
, The diagram illustrates the
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process
and function of a
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wave
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energy
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machine
and the location that suits this
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machine
where it can work
accurately
.

To
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with, Place the bottom chamber of the
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wave
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energy
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under the
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sea
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level
and another chamber which consists of a
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turbine
should be
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placed
above the
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sea
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level
. The direction of the
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wave
should be towards the
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.
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when
a
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hits the
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the water
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level
reaches the bottom chamber the airflow produced by the
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move
towards the
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. Here
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rotates in a clockwise direction where the air
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moves
towards the open channel and for the cooling
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, there will be a filter that pushes air towards the
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turbine
during this
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the
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produced from the
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will secure in the electricity generator.

After this, Location options for
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machines
are should be
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placed
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in
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seas
where tides forms
frequently
.
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onshore side of the
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in between where large
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and
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small
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waves
produce. The starting side gives the low output due to
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small
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waves
and installation costs are low compared to where large
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from the depth of
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sea
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level
were high and installation costs are
also
high as it produces high outputs.

In conclusion
, it is the procedure of how a
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energy
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simulates and where it should be
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placed
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IELTS academic How a wave energy machine simulates.

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5 paragraphs
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6.0
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