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The two maps show a park in 2010 and 2016.

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The maps illustrate the changes in Milton Park from 2010 to 2016. Over the period, the garden has seen significant developments; the most noticeable was the increase in leisure facilities and the removal of the natural areas. In 2010, the lawn consisted of natural fields, which has transformed into recreation playgrounds during the last six years. A considerable change has been observed to the west side of the park where fields were removed and replaced with amusement areas like picnic and playground. The other development included the expansion of the pond into the boating space. Besides these, toy and ice-cream shops have also been opened next to the boating lake to the north side. On the right side of the path, trees have been cleared to make way for the adventure playing area. Likewise, a walking path has extended next to the play area. A mini-golf region has also been constructed to the south of the park.
The maps illustrate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in Milton Park from 2010 to 2016. Over the period, the garden has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
significant developments; the most noticeable was the increase in leisure facilities and the removal of the natural areas.

In 2010, the lawn consisted of natural fields, which has transformed into recreation playgrounds during the last six years. A considerable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
has
been observed
to the west side of the park where fields
were removed
and replaced with amusement areas like picnic and playground. The other development included the expansion of the pond into the boating space.
Besides
these, toy and ice-cream shops have
also
been opened
next
to the boating lake to the north side.

On the right side of the path, trees have
been cleared
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
way for the adventure playing area.
Likewise
, a walking path has extended
next
to the play area. A mini-golf region has
also
been constructed
to the south of the park.
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