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The given map show in 2008 and also some changes to till date

The given map show in 2008 and also some changes to till date Q5kPy
The first given map illustrate the information regarding science park in 2008. Whereas, in another map depict the changes which occurred in the science park after 2008 to till date. The first map show the Science City in 2008 the main gate located at east side in south east corner there was rail track where is opposite side there were trees IT sector situated near the small jungle there was also one pass hit connected to the car parking cycle cyber security and business units not side of the business unit there was Grassland and near class grassland there were office and reception for the Science Park. There have been some changes which can be seen in the Science Park today. North west side of the Science Park there was a grassland remov and open Research and Development Department reception is also replace with University hub separate space for cyber security is also expand. Innovation Centre is open in place of it centres outside of the park there is open a new railway station and also build a new Sahib cycle parts near cars park. Overall, science for become more fascinated and modern for people however some things had sacrificed
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science
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park
in 2008. Whereas, in another map depict the
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changes
which occurred in the
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science
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park
after 2008 to till date.

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map
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City in 2008 the main gate located at east side in
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south east
corner there was rail
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track
where is opposite side there were trees IT sector situated near the
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small
jungle there was
also
one pass hit connected to the car parking cycle cyber security and business units not side of the business unit there was Grassland and near
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class
grassland there were office and reception for the
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Science
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Park
. There have been
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some
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changes
which can be
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in the
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Park
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today
.
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North west
side of the
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there was a grassland
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and open Research and Development Department reception is
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with University hub separate space for cyber security is
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. Innovation
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is open in place of it
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there is open a new railway station and
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build a new Sahib cycle parts near cars park.

Overall
,
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for become more fascinated and modern for
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however
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IELTS academic The given map show in 2008 and also some changes to till date

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