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Percentage of the population aged 65 and above, in Canada, Germany, and the UK in 1988, 2000 and projected for 2030

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This chart illustrates, the increase of the percentage of the population aged 65 and above, in Canada, Germany, and the UK in 1988, 2000 and projected for 2030. Overall, the percentage is always higher in Germany than in Canada and the UK. The lowest population of above 65 years was in the UK in 1988. The highest population of elderly people was in Germany in 2000. Germany is 20. 45% higher than the UK, which is 14. 23%, the lowest in 1988. In 1988, Canada has 16. 32% more than the UK, which is 14. 23% less. Germany has increased five times bigger than Canada and UK from 1988 to 2030. In 2030, the UK reached 20. 35% less than Canada and Germany. There is not much change in the elderly population in the UK in 1988 and 2000. There is a projected increase above 5% in all three countries, naming Germany, Canada, and the UK by 2030.
This chart illustrates, the increase of the percentage of the
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aged 65 and above, in Canada, Germany, and the UK in 1988, 2000 and projected for 2030.

Overall
, the percentage is always higher in Germany than in Canada and the UK. The lowest
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population
of above 65 years was in the UK in 1988. The highest
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of elderly
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was in Germany in 2000.

Germany is 20. 45% higher than the UK, which is 14. 23%, the lowest in 1988. In 1988, Canada has 16. 32% more than the UK, which is 14. 23% less. Germany has increased five times bigger than Canada and UK from 1988 to 2030. In 2030, the UK reached 20. 35% less than Canada and Germany. There is not much
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in the elderly
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in the UK in 1988 and 2000.

There is a projected increase above 5% in all three countries, naming Germany, Canada, and the UK by 2030.
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IELTS academic Percentage of the population aged 65 and above, in Canada, Germany, and the UK in 1988, 2000 and projected for 2030

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