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the proportion of passenger kilometers travelled by different modes of transport in Shanghai in 2996 and one possible projection for their use in 2030

the proportion of passenger kilometers travelled by different modes of transport in Shanghai in 2996 and one possible projection for their use in 2030 YLDgN

The utilization of various means of transport in Shanghai and its prediction in 2030 are depicted in the given bar chart. Overall, the passenger kilometers by bus, bicycle, walking and scooters, which accounted for the highest percentages in 1996, are expected to fall. Meanwhile, train use is forecast to grow, and the use of cars is likely to ascend, becoming the most commonly used form of transport. Regarding walking and scooter, the figures will likely be reduced by half, from 7& to 3% and from 12% to 7%, respectively. Bicycles in 1996, however, comprised a higher proportion at 27%, but it is projected to be the least popular transport modes along with walking. Likewise, the number of bus-users was the highest among these transport types; but the estimates show that there will be a sharp drop to 22% by 2030. Moving onto the figures for trains, they were not operated back in 1996 but the year 2030 will witness an increase in the use of this transport, reaching 13% rates of use. Similarly, that of cars was 15% in the past but it is expected to have more than tripled by 2030, holding the most used type of transport position.

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