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The two maps illustrate the development of Harrison’s Stables between 1920 and 2010.

The two maps illustrate the development of Harrison’s Stables between 1920 and 2010. LG1o3
The two maps illustrate the development of Harrison’s Stables between 1920 and 2010. A glance at the maps reveals that the area witnessed dramatic transformations, such as the complete disappearance of Field and the replacement of Main House by Car park. It is also notable that Stables expanded dramatically. In 1920, Cottages located in the North of the map, was halfway between Main House and Bam. After 90 years, while Bam converted into office Block, the other 2 rest were replaced by Car park. Furthermore, a Train Line was constructed in the top-left hand corner of the map, next to Car Park. Additionally, the Stables was double in size, which took the largest space. It is clear that Field, situated to the bottom right hand corner, completely disappeared. Moreover, there was a significant change to Fence and Riding Path. In 1920, they were constructed in a straight line, while in 2010, Fence was placed parallel to Riding Path and both of them opposite to Office Block.
The two
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illustrate the development of Harrison’s Stables between 1920 and 2010.

A glance at the
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maps
reveals that the area witnessed dramatic transformations, such as the complete disappearance of Field and the replacement of Main
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House
by Car park. It is
also
notable that Stables expanded
dramatically
.

In 1920, Cottages located in the North of the
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map
, was halfway between Main
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House
and
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Bam
. After 90 years, while
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Bam
converted into office Block, the other 2 rest
were replaced
by Car park.
Furthermore
, a Train Line
was constructed
in the top-
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left
hand corner of the
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map
,
next
to Car Park.
Additionally
, the Stables was
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double in size
, which took the largest space.

It is
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clear
that Field, situated to the bottom
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right hand
corner, completely disappeared.
Moreover
, there was a significant
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change
to Fence and Riding Path. In 1920, they
were constructed
in a straight line, while in 2010, Fence
was placed
parallel to Riding Path and both of them opposite to Office Block.

IELTS academic The two maps illustrate the development of Harrison’s Stables between 1920 and 2010.

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