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number of peoples in UK eating more than 5 portions

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The presented bar graph depicts the information about the proportion of people who intake 5 or more portions of herb and fish per day from 2011 to 2017. The data has been calibrated in percentage. To begin with, in 2011, the highest figure of women eat 5 or more portion of produce and fish per day, which accounted of 20%. These rate remained same in next two years. After that this percentage rose dramatically and peaked at high to 36% in 2016, previously fall of 30% in the end of the period. Likewise, men showed considerably rise throughout the given time span, except 2016 due to the fact at that time it decreased slightly. In 2011, the statistic of men who consumed 5 or more salad and fish per day was about 17%, on the contrary at the end of the period these total reached to roughly one quarter. Moreover, children showed a number of fluctuation in their total, which started from 10% in 2011 then describe a number of fluctuations trend and reached to 15% in 2017. Overall, it is manifest from the graph that the figure of people who consumed salad and fish per day was increased throughout the time. Also, women showed the highest percentage in contrast to men and children.
The presented bar graph depicts the information about the proportion of
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people


who intake 5 or more portions of herb

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and
fish per day from 2011 to 2017. The data has been
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calibrated


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in
percentage.

To
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begin


with, in 2011, the highest figure

of women eat 5 or more portion of produce

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and
fish per day, which accounted of 20%. These rate remained same in
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next


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two
years. After that this percentage rose
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dramatically


and peaked at high to 36% in 2016, previously

fall of 30% in the
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end


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of
the period.
Likewise
,
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men


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showed


considerably


rise throughout the
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given


time span, except 2016 due to the fact

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at
that time it decreased
slightly
. In 2011, the
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statistic


of
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men


who consumed 5 or more salad

and fish per day was about 17%,
on the contrary


at the
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end


of the period these total

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reached
to roughly one quarter.

Moreover
, children
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showed


a number of

fluctuation in their total, which
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started


from 10% in 2011 then
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describe


a number of

fluctuations

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trend
and reached to 15% in 2017.

Overall
, it is manifest from the graph that the figure

of
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people


who consumed salad

and fish per day
was increased


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throughout
the time.
Also
, women
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showed


the highest percentage
in contrast


to
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men


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and
children.
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IELTS academic number of peoples in UK eating more than 5 portions

Academic
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38 paragraphs
214 words
5.5
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