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The diagram shows how an Internet search engine works.

The diagram shows how an Internet search engine works. 0MjA1
The chart illustrates the process how search engine functions. Overall, the process consist of 6 stages, beginning with opening browser screen and typing the question to the search engine and finishing up with storing of the data on hard drive. Initially the first stage involves typing the question, phrase or word on search engine screen and pressing the search button to begin the process. Next web-spider scans World Wide Web to eventually show the list of most suitable words on the user’s screen. Later on, the spider sorts the results out to firstly show the newest results as well as the most proven results (wikipedia… etc. ) and then after that on the next 10 or 20 rows illustrates less and less popular web-pages with less views. Eventually as user will find the most suitable answer for his criteria required answers will be stored on hard drive for future utilization without internet consuming.
The chart illustrates the process how
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search
engine functions.

Overall
, the process consist of 6 stages, beginning with opening browser screen and typing the question to the
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search
engine and finishing up with storing of the data on
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hard
drive.

Initially
the
first
stage involves typing the question, phrase or word on
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search
engine screen and pressing the
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search
button to
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begin
the process.
Next
web-spider scans World Wide Web to
eventually
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show
the list of most suitable words on the user’s screen. Later on, the spider sorts the results out to
firstly
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show
the newest results
as well
as the most proven results (
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wikipedia
… etc.
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)
and then after that on the
next
10 or 20 rows illustrates less and less popular web-pages with
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less
views.
Eventually
as user will find the most suitable answer for his criteria required answers will
be stored
on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
drive for future utilization without internet consuming.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how an Internet search engine works.

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3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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