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The production process of sugar

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The figure represented below displays the process of the sugar production which is started from the sugar cane. Overall, there are some steps using a number of appliances to process the sugar cane. To begin, the sugar cane must be grown for 12-18 months before it has ready to be harvested, whether by using the harvester machine or by hand manually. Furthermore, the harvested sugar cane have to be processed in a crusher to make it as the ‘juice’. This matter, in the subsequent stage, is purified by using a device called limestone filter. Moreover, the purified juice distributed into the evaporator in order to transform it as the syrup. When the syrup eventually has been formed, this substance is sent to the centrifuge to let the sugar crystals being separated from the syrup. The crystals, finally, are dried and cooled in the big tube. The sugar crystals then are ready to be marketed.

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