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The two maps illustrate the community of Stokeford has been changed significantly between 1930 and 2010.

The two maps illustrate the community of Stokeford has been changed significantly between 1930 and 2010. KlYJ3
The two maps illustrate the community of Stokeford has been changed significantly between 1930 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that provision for accommodation, school, and retirement home has increased, replacing land which was previously used for farmland, garden, and store. One key important change is the construction of houses that have only 10 buildings in 1930 but these have been extended and replaced the farmland into 51 buildings in 2010 over the area. In addition, the retirement home, that previously there was the huge house, has made bigger. Moreover, the primary academic has been developed. On the other hand, the nature area such as gardens, where near the main road, have been removed and built into the sub-road. Further, the facility on the north-west side has been removed. For examples, shops has been cut down by the housing development. Lastly, the farmland has been gone in 2010.
The two maps illustrate the community of
Stokeford
has been
changed
significantly
between 1930 and 2010.

Overall
, it is
clear
that provision for accommodation, school, and retirement home has increased, replacing land which was previously
used
for farmland, garden, and store.

One key
important
change
is the construction of
houses
that have
only
10 buildings in 1930
but
these have
been extended
and replaced the farmland into 51 buildings in 2010 over the area.
In addition
, the retirement home, that previously there was the huge
house
, has made bigger.
Moreover
, the primary academic has
been developed
.
On the other hand
, the nature area such as gardens, where near the main road, have
been removed
and built into the sub-road.
Further
, the facility on the north-west side has
been removed
. For examples, shops has been
cut
down by the housing development.
Lastly
, the farmland has
been gone
in 2010.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate the community of Stokeford has been changed significantly between 1930 and 2010.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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