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the growth in wage within G7 nations between 2000-2007 and 2008-2012

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The two bar graphs provide statistics on the growth in salaries in seven countries including Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, Uk, and US during two periods of time, from 2000-2007 and 2008-2012. In the first period, most of the countries had a positive trend in wage growth, except for Japan, Italy and Canada where a negative trend happened in 2002, ranging from the low of %–1 in Canada and the high of nearly % –2 in Japan. In other years, however, the vast majority of countries had seen quite a significant increase in salaries, with UK featuring the highest position of positive growth in 2000, by %5. Over the next four years, the patterns of wage growth are somehow the same in most of the country. Whereas in most countries, the developments in salary amount range mostly from %0. 5 and %2. 5, in UK, Japan and Italy, there happened a noticeable downturn of income during these years. Especially for UK where it reached its lowest point of over %-2 in 2011. To sum up, most countries had a positive growth in the quantity of annual salaries in both periods of time, with the exception of some countries showing a negative pattern in a couple of years.

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