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The two maps illustrate Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015 after several changes to its infrastructure.

The two maps illustrate Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015 after several changes to its infrastructure. K0KaR
The given maps illustrate the development of Pancha Village that have taken place between 2005 and 2015. Overall, the area experienced significant changes involve numerous traffic infrastructure developments, the rearrangement of the religious zones, marketplace, educational institutions and energy-related services during the time period. Concerning the left parts of the pictures, whereas accommodation remained unchanged in terms of number, three housing units’ antennas were upgraded, necessitated the construction of two telecommunication towers in the 2015 map bottom corner. The market z nearby was expanded from 5 to 8 stalls, relocated to two separated rows of four. A soil road in the middle of Pancha Village has been renovated to an asphalt road for vehicles with a pedestrian sign, three road signs and electricity lines added alongside in 2015. Regarding the right parts, the primary school has been reconstructed into three particular buildings of both primary and secondary levels, with a novel central flag pole and the same entrance gate. Two houses in the right side residential area were demolished, leaving an open area in Pancha Village. On the right bottom corner of the blueprints, where there were two pagodas in 2005, an additional pagoda was built and rearranged the religious zone in 2015.
The
given
maps illustrate the development of
Pancha
Village that have taken place between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, the area experienced significant
changes
involve numerous traffic infrastructure developments, the rearrangement of the religious zones, marketplace, educational institutions and energy-related services during the time period.

Concerning the
left
parts of the pictures, whereas accommodation remained unchanged in terms of number, three housing units’ antennas
were upgraded
, necessitated the construction of two telecommunication towers in the 2015 map bottom corner. The market z nearby
was expanded
from 5 to 8 stalls, relocated to two separated rows of four. A soil road in the middle of
Pancha
Village has
been renovated
to an asphalt road for vehicles with a pedestrian
sign
, three road signs and electricity lines
added
alongside in 2015.

Regarding the right parts, the primary school has
been reconstructed
into three particular buildings of both primary and secondary levels, with a novel central flag pole and the same entrance gate. Two
houses
in the right side
residential area
were demolished
, leaving an open area in
Pancha
Village. On the right bottom corner of the blueprints, where there were two pagodas in 2005, an additional pagoda
was built
and rearranged the religious zone in 2015.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015 after several changes to its infrastructure.

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