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The two maps illustrate changes that have been taken place in an area from 1995 to the present.

The two maps illustrate changes that have been taken place in an area from 1995 to the present. MBGPq
The given two maps depict information about the improvement made in a place between year 1995 and 2021. To begin with, the Farm land which was situated in North West is divided into two parts that is golf course and tennis course. However, Public park is replaced with Holiday homes and a new car park manufactured in the east direction. Hotels which were located in mid they are at the same place in present time but only buliding enhanced then before. To moving further, In 1995, number of houses were less while, in present time it sharply increased. On the other side, Sports area which was at West side, in present time it converted in restaurents at some place. Moreover, No changes occured in coffee but the road is divided into two path one side go to coffee and other side for Apartment which is made by destroying Fish market. In the South West there was a Morning fish boat in 1995 it is replaced with Yatch and Sea in present time. To sum up, it is vividly seen that there are various changes made during 1995 to the present time. In year 1995 number of houses were less but present time it is increased very rapidly whilst no changes made in Sea, Coffee and Hotel.
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two maps depict information about the improvement made in a place between year 1995 and 2021. To
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begin
with, the Farm land which
was situated
in North West
is divided
into two parts
that is
golf course and tennis course.
However
, Public park
is replaced
with Holiday homes and a new car park manufactured in the east direction. Hotels which
were located
in mid they are at the same place in
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present
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time
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but
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only
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buliding
enhanced then
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before
. To moving
further
, In 1995, number of
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houses
were less while, in
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present
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time
it
sharply
increased. On the other side, Sports area which was at West side, in
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present
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time
it converted in
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restaurents
at
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some
place.
Moreover
, No
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changes
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occured
in coffee
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but
the road
is divided
into two path one side go to coffee and other side for Apartment which
is made
by destroying Fish market. In the South West there was a Morning fish boat in 1995 it
is replaced
with
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Yatch
and Sea in
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present
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time
. To sum up, it is
vividly
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seen
that there are various
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changes
made during 1995 to the
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present
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time
. In year 1995 number of
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houses
were less
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but
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present
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time
it
is increased
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very
rapidly
whilst no
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changes
made in Sea, Coffee and Hotel.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate changes that have been taken place in an area from 1995 to the present.

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  American English
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