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Section 1: time spend on smartphones, by category

Section 1: time spend on smartphones, by category GrXVw

The charts show the category about the time people spend on smartphones The largest percentage, 35 percent, use smartphones for games. Twenty nine percent spend their time on social networking and twenty percent for utilities when they use their smartphones. Just eight percent for music and videos, 5 percent for other use. However, three percent of user uses smartphones in order to watch or look for news. Overall, people prefer spend time on smartphones for entertainment to anything else.

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