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Section 1: time spend on smartphones, by category

Section 1: time spend on smartphones, by category GrXVw
The charts show the category about the time people spend on smartphones The largest percentage, 35 percent, use smartphones for games. Twenty nine percent spend their time on social networking and twenty percent for utilities when they use their smartphones. Just eight percent for music and videos, 5 percent for other use. However, three percent of user uses smartphones in order to watch or look for news. Overall, people prefer spend time on smartphones for entertainment to anything else.
The charts
show
the category about the time
people
spend on smartphones The largest percentage, 35
percent
,
use
smartphones for games.
Twenty nine
percent
spend their time on social networking and twenty
percent
for utilities when they
use
their smartphones.
Just
eight
percent
for music and videos, 5
percent
for other
use
.
However
, three
percent
of user
uses
smartphones in order to
watch
or look for news.
Overall
,
people
prefer spend time on smartphones for entertainment to anything else.
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IELTS academic Section 1: time spend on smartphones, by category

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