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The two maps give information about a university sports centre currently and the renovation plans.

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The two maps give information about a university sports centre currently and the renovation plans. Overall, the planned redevelopment of this complex includes the optimization of the vacant territory as well as the refurbishment of the facilities. The sports centre is now separated into three main territories, two of which are outdoor courts. The other is the main sports area to the North of the entrance, where a 25m pool is centered on. The pool is surrounded by a changing room, gym, seating and reception turning clockwise, from the West to the South. In the predicted renovation of the sports centre, it witnesses the variety of sports and sport areas. One of the most noticeable changes is that a leisure pool will be constructed to the North-West of the entrance, where outdoor courts are now located. Furthermore, two changing rooms will be built at two corners of this centre. Similarly, a sports shop and café are on the left and right side of the entrance respectively, and next to each changing room. The other outdoor courts to the East of the centre are replaced with more function rooms, including sport hail and two dance studios. Although there will be many changes, the swimming area will still be found in the future, with the expansion of the gym.
The two maps give information about a university
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sports
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centre
currently
and the renovation plans.

Overall
, the planned redevelopment of this complex includes the optimization of the vacant territory
as well
as the refurbishment of the facilities.

The
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sports
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centre
is
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now
separated into three main territories, two of which are outdoor courts. The other is the main
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sports
area to the North of the entrance, where a
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25m
pool
is centered
on.
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The
pool
is surrounded
by a changing
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room
, gym, seating and reception turning clockwise, from the West to the South.

In the predicted renovation of the
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sports
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centre
, it witnesses the variety of
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sports
and
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sport
areas. One of the most noticeable
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changes
is that a leisure pool will
be constructed
to the North-West of the entrance, where outdoor courts are
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now
located.
Furthermore
, two changing
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rooms
will
be built
at two corners of this
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centre
.
Similarly
, a
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sports
shop and café are on the
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left
and right side of the entrance
respectively
, and
next
to each changing
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room
. The other outdoor courts to the East of the
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centre
are replaced
with more function
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rooms
, including
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sport
hail and two dance studios. Although there will be
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many
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changes
, the swimming area will
still
be found
in the future, with the expansion of the gym.
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IELTS academic The two maps give information about a university sports centre currently and the renovation plans.

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